I like how you provided a lot of evidence for your points. Also, you explained all your points clearly so the reader knows exactly what you are trying to say.
What I like is that you provided lots of evidence and explanation which is good.. you have lots of points to the situation. But there are too many words, try making it more concise :D
I like how you provided a lot of evidence for your points. Also, you explained all your points clearly so the reader knows exactly what you are trying to say.
ReplyDeleteWhat I like is that you provided lots of evidence and explanation which is good.. you have lots of points to the situation.
ReplyDeleteBut there are too many words, try making it more concise :D